Labels

Thursday, August 5, 2010

Assignment 1

Backdrop Addresses Cowboy
Starspangled cowboy
sauntering out of the almost-
silly West, on your face
a porcelain grin,
tugging a papier-mache cactus
on wheels behind you with a string,


you are innocent as a bathtub
full of bullets.


Your righteous eyes, your laconic
trigger-fingers
people the streets with villains:
as you move, the air in front of you
blossoms with targets


and you leave behind you a heroic
trail of desolation:
beer bottles
slaughtered by the side
of the road, bird-
skulls bleaching in the sunset.


I ought to be watching
from behind a cliff or a cardboard storefront
when the shooting starts, hands clasped
in admiration,


but I am elsewhere.
Then what about me


what about the I
confronting you on that border
you are always trying to cross?


I am the horizon
you ride towards, the thing you can never lasso


I am also what surrounds you:
my brain
scattered with your
tincans, bones, empty shells,
the litter of your invasions.


I am the space you desecrate
as you pass through.

Margaret Atwood

Analysis by;


  • Free Association
    • Imagery
    • Narrator
    • Paradox
    • Icons
    • Stereotypes
    • Myths
  • Line by line
    • Metaphor
    • Rhyme, Rhythm
    • Enjambment
  • Grammmatical Structure
    • Structure
    • Stanza
    • Style
    • Genre
Steps
  1. Get the "big Idea'
    1. Decide on angle, perspective, attitude, theme
    2. Refine into two or three thesis statements
    3. Decide on 5 main ideas that reinforce the big idea, 
      1. link them to specific text
    4. Write the opening funnel paragraph
      1. Start with general and 
      2. finish with thesis statement
    5. Create paragraphs
      1. Linking statement
      2. Emotional 
      3. Reference
      4. Objective statement
      5. Bias
      6. Linking sentence
    6. Write conclusion:
      1. Rephrase thesis statement
      2. End with general perspective for meaning. 

    No comments:

    Post a Comment